Konthasha kichhu maan abhimaan,
Aaj abar dilo ujaan;
Chokher jole guitar bajiye,
Sei bhalo thakar bhaan.
Purono boi-er gondho jemon,
Hridjolsay nesha temon.
Jolsaghore ami achi, tumi acho,
Aar ache jhaarlonthon bati,
E je sobi,
chomok bilati.
Aalo koi? Aandhar jeno boro,
Aabeg chhilo joto, thomke giye joro.
Kaancher boyom aalto kore khule,
Praanpakhiti daana jodi mele,
Tyajjo hobe tomar moni hote:
Ipshita tomar holam aami aaj
sei bhoyete!
~Tomar Ipshita.
.....but Ipshita kaun hai?? :D
ReplyDelete.....and y is the writer crying?
ipshito in bengali means 'the desired one' n ipshita therefore is ' the desired lady'.......the writer is a stricken bird that wishes to fly in sum direction but she is forced to move in the opp direction. She is in love, rather she thinks she is in love n the very stigma of being dumped, of not being his 'mon ami'...makes her unable to defy his 'likes', though it may lead to her 'dislikes'.....she refuses every urge of kindlin a covetous amour.
ReplyDeletethe tumult of emotions thus harboured makes tears roll down...[the tears may nt necessarily mean cryin aloud] n yeah may i kno ur good name please....i mean along wid the surname...........if u dnt mind?????????!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletehmm.. bapre! ur thinking is sum real big!! gr8!
ReplyDeletehaha.actly...honestly,.. i dont undst this poetic thinking,.mane amar thinink is much "shima-bodhhao" :P isilia i'll keep asking foolish questions,. dnt mind.. ok? :D
r u asking me,. mane my name??
"ristein mein toh hum tumhare blog reader lagte hai,
nam hai ddc (xapand it the way u want ;) )"
hahaha... u r the "DebDrishtir Choyon"...kemon dilam naamta?
ReplyDelete@sammohinee .....your english poems are more classy. But it does'nt require a nobody like me to say that your ideas have the aura of ingenuity! The sparkling brilliance of a thinking soul.
thank u purnata............n yeah that was a wonderful name for d one jo rishte mein hamare blog reader lagte hai........................
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ReplyDeleteyup.......u do take notice of my aimless gaze.............i agree, i m not lethal wid my beng verses bt as u kno thr r tyms wen it seems dat a certain lingo was meant to chronicle a well-defined range of emotions.
ReplyDeletearre ddc amar bhai.:-)
ReplyDeleteami seta jani.......eto o gobet noi........
ReplyDeletepurnatar matha ta gache! haha :D
ReplyDeleteamake nam dichhe,.. chobir opor kobita likhche!! haha,.. bhai er proti eto bhalobasha!! haha.. sadhu sadhu! main bagbag ho gaya!
ami kobitar opor kichu bolbo na,.. bujhte e parchina tora kon bhashae kotha bolchis,. so ,.. best of luck 2 both of u,.. ami toh phute nilam,.. :P
purnatar r aamar matha je gechhe no doubt.............tor screw gulo ki thik jaygay ache???????? we r all mad bloggers hehehaha..........gorome pagol hoye jachhi......gheme pagol hoye jachi haha........i kno dat was damn silly haha.............three cheers for mad bloogers hip hip hurrah..hip hip hurrah..hiphip hurrah
ReplyDeleteawesome is the only word I can use...........by d way "boyom" mane ki??????????
ReplyDeletejst best... never stop writing.
ReplyDeletei wont.....howevr they try n crush me down......thank u........keep visiting n following
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